The theme of home is quite evident throughout the novel but
Eggers seems to use many different styles to emphasise it. Most of the home
themed scenes focus on the family attempting to find comfort again but never
really feeling at total ease.
We are first given a description of the house as being a ‘factory’
which immediately gives off a slightly negative, dull aura. Factories are not
usually associated with ‘comfort’ or a homely feeling so for him to call it
that suggests something is off. Dave later on personifies the furniture in his
family room, giving them ‘clenched teeth’ and ‘sharp elbows’ to express the
almost frustration felt in the room. Although some adjectives used are
unpleasant, Dave says the family possess random items because they ‘see beauty
within and cannot say no’. He is most likely reminiscing on all the times he
thought things were useless but now have slight meaning to him. When in the
hospital room, Beth points out the lack of TV to which Dave replies with ‘weird’,
suggesting even the smallest of devices represent home.
When Dave and Beth begin house hunting, Dave feels a deep
sense of guilt due to the constant disappointment occurring. However, he soon
describes his ideal home in the style of listing because it’s always been his
dream to live in a loft. The neighbours also seem to be a vital factor when
moving because they don’t feel comfortable or at home when everyone is
distasteful. A new home also proves difficult because of the ages of the two.
It’s hard enough without a mother but when landlords refuse them because of the
difficulties, the idea of home seems to be getting further away. We know Dave
senses something is wrong before even being told due to the ‘stricken’ look of
the man upon seeing the two. The short, simple sentences express defeat and
almost impatience, due to the time waste on a lost cause. Even after moving
from house to house, none of them contain the homely feeling they crave. They
feel like ‘house sitters’ or ‘vacationers’. This may be down to the lack of
household appliances and possessions they hold dear to them.
Dave often refers to himself as the ‘parental figure’ but
only when it suits him, and sometimes Toph. He worries often that others will
notice the laziness in the household and report it. When house hunting, Dave
always checks for the household appliances mainly due to the responsibility he
doesn’t want to have. Without all the technology, they live messily, only
sometimes motivated to clean when someone points it out. However, forgetting
about responsibilities and letting loose seems to be almost therapeutic to them
because they feel innocent and child-like again. To them, home really is where the heart is and is not in a house but in fact in the family.
Good overview and great start to paragraph one (although try and up the number of terms - every quote needs close analysis using terminology systematically to hit the higher bands). Try and keep the focus strong - look at where paragraph one wanders onto a second idea. Good planning will help you select and develop the best points using terminology and linking to form, structure and context. Really good understanding and some good use of terminology shows your developing skills. Work on hitting the high-grade criteria and leaving out any weaker/undeveloped points that will drag the marks down.
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